my myth...my dreaming
outside the veils of seasons
a piece of starlight splinters
NOTE
I have tried to create a circular connection between the three linked poems.
First and last links may be inter-changed in reading order.
(Today's poem is short, mindful that you may wish to read the links as well.)
Poetry form: katauta 5-7-7
Linking to:
Imaginary Garden With Real Toads - A Poem of Our Own
- create poetry into which we weave the titles of 3 of our own poems.
15 comments:
nice!
A Rat's Nibble
Spine-shiveringly beautiful.
I very much liked the journey through your source poems too.
Lovely. K.
This is wonderful :D
They say time isn't linear, anyway. Time to dream...
This is beautiful, and so clever, I read it backward and forward and the essence remains the same,,
Such a sense of wholeness to this short form - I would not have thought it was made up of individual titles.
Especially love the way you created the last line... beautiful
I can see the links between these three, definitely--the roots of a collective past, the things of value we magpie up, feel but somehow can't know, and the circle of natural things we somehow ride like a wheel, on it yet not always part of it in our own minds. Really well-crafted in concept and content, Gemma.
This is beautiful..What a lovely weaving of your three poems.
"a piece of starlight splinters" is just a gorgeous, visceral image.
Interesting the idea of splintering starlight...beautiful woven titles!
Very lovely!
I like your style....the magical quality to it :-)
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