Beyond the crumbles and webs of life...
A sigh can mean and say so much - as complex and vivid as the sun rising and falling - a clever use of form and a rich warm texture to this piece
I love how you tied it all together in that last stanza, somehow making the sense that sunset needed so much.
oh yes sunsets do make us tend to sigh, so awesome, so magnificent and so closingHave a nice Sunday Gemmamuch love...
Indeed, there is something so magical about sunsets which triggers memories of days long gone. Beautifully penned.Lots of love,Sanaa
cool sigh of another light.. beautifully done..
Every sign that time is passing is a blow to the heart that wants love to stand still in time.
A beautiful progression.
Oh yes Gemma...big sigh of delight for these exquisite words...what wonders sunsets can render!
What a stunning sunset photo. Wow! I love the closing lines - and especially "my autumn". Beautiful.
A subtle build here--so wonderful--to loss and beauty still.
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