Sunday, 15 May 2016

a sunset sigh...





sunset
autumn moment 
of memories

autumn sunset
cool sigh
of other light

your sunset
your memory
my autumn


Linking to:
Poets United - Poetry Pantry #302

10 comments:

Jae Rose said...

A sigh can mean and say so much - as complex and vivid as the sun rising and falling - a clever use of form and a rich warm texture to this piece

brudberg said...

I love how you tied it all together in that last stanza, somehow making the sense that sunset needed so much.

Gillena Cox said...

oh yes sunsets do make us tend to sigh, so awesome, so magnificent and so closing

Have a nice Sunday Gemma

much love...

Sanaa Rizvi said...

Indeed, there is something so magical about sunsets which triggers memories of days long gone. Beautifully penned.

Lots of love,
Sanaa

thotpurge said...

cool sigh of another light.. beautifully done..

Old Egg said...

Every sign that time is passing is a blow to the heart that wants love to stand still in time.

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

A beautiful progression.

Donna@LivingFromHappiness said...

Oh yes Gemma...big sigh of delight for these exquisite words...what wonders sunsets can render!

Sherry Blue Sky said...

What a stunning sunset photo. Wow! I love the closing lines - and especially "my autumn". Beautiful.

Susan said...

A subtle build here--so wonderful--to loss and beauty still.

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