maimed woods and metals
lean on each other to make
a new kind of make-shift nest
grasses twine and bend
offering some charity
stray coin in a thread-bare cap
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assets
n e g l e c t
spirits
spirits
a b a n d o n
trinkets
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9 comments:
I was really taken with your idea in this. Good writing.
It takes the eye of a poet to see the significance of an old wreck. Each line here carries its weight.
your last two stanzas are SO profoundly true
I really like this, especially the last line. Spirits abandon trinkets. It is so true!
what a beautiful perception ... loved it :-)
I think you caught it so well in so few words ~
Scenes such as this are poignant as they hold unspoken stories to be imagined by wordsmiths.
i like the every day in this very much.
a spectacular sharing; have a nice Wednesday
much love...
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