tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7691731886166698880.post8184184491956382205..comments2022-05-31T03:49:59.390+10:00Comments on Veiled Songlines : hooves...Gemma Wisemanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7691731886166698880.post-78361426597242519702016-04-04T06:41:45.355+10:002016-04-04T06:41:45.355+10:00I love the line "the earth is drumming" ...I love the line "the earth is drumming" beautiful poem!!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7691731886166698880.post-44356593357631218102016-04-03T16:08:53.356+10:002016-04-03T16:08:53.356+10:00Oh, I don't know if you're too sharp. I th...Oh, I don't know if you're too sharp. I think many people are reading very quickly as we make rounds to all the poets this month, though... Effective allusion, especially in such short form. ~grapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7691731886166698880.post-11116370921811074102016-04-03T13:43:26.970+10:002016-04-03T13:43:26.970+10:00This is gorgeous! I adore this:
"resolute hoo...This is gorgeous! I adore this:<br />"resolute hooves of morning<br />torment the tidal rhythms"<br /><br />Great sound throughout.✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7691731886166698880.post-76909663862145897692016-04-03T12:53:38.656+10:002016-04-03T12:53:38.656+10:00In response to your Note: I think when we are writ...In response to your Note: I think when we are writing daily and reading everyone else's too, sometimes the readings can be a bit cursory! I'm glad you elaborated so I could have another look and see the full implications.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7691731886166698880.post-84158710065365300452016-04-03T12:53:04.130+10:002016-04-03T12:53:04.130+10:00I particularly like your use of color.I particularly like your use of color.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7691731886166698880.post-84048026328628718492016-04-03T12:01:18.432+10:002016-04-03T12:01:18.432+10:00Nice, Gemma. I wasn't taking the horses and h...Nice, Gemma. I wasn't taking the horses and hooves literally but as forces working on the tides, etc. I too would not have thought back to the four horsemen in Revelation. You are good! Too good for me!<br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7691731886166698880.post-83945917695465846142016-04-03T08:56:03.457+10:002016-04-03T08:56:03.457+10:00Wow! "resolute hooves of morning" Love t...Wow! "resolute hooves of morning" Love that. Beautiful pieceSusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7691731886166698880.post-85100963039626019802016-04-03T06:45:22.582+10:002016-04-03T06:45:22.582+10:00Lovely!!Lovely!!Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7691731886166698880.post-60188814144104190552016-04-03T03:30:09.072+10:002016-04-03T03:30:09.072+10:00Love it, title, photo and poem!Love it, title, photo and poem!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7691731886166698880.post-49586038700601177222016-04-03T02:34:56.499+11:002016-04-03T02:34:56.499+11:00The earth is drumming - you showed that with your ...The earth is drumming - you showed that with your choice wordsDebi Swimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08255928985823418669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7691731886166698880.post-32418788567050533922016-04-03T02:17:10.146+11:002016-04-03T02:17:10.146+11:00"the earth is drumming", I feel that, bu..."the earth is drumming", I feel that, but to what end? I enjoyed this and the photo is beautiful and fitting to your words.Elleceenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7691731886166698880.post-78599769808391918902016-04-03T00:34:20.355+11:002016-04-03T00:34:20.355+11:00"resolute hooves of morning
torment the tidal..."resolute hooves of morning<br />torment the tidal rhythms"<br /><br />So good. Adamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08186816724300478129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7691731886166698880.post-47897625030549466422016-04-03T00:10:25.390+11:002016-04-03T00:10:25.390+11:00Beautiful! And not unlike what my poem to this pro...Beautiful! And not unlike what my poem to this prompt says, though very different in style and form.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7691731886166698880.post-77399581142759283212016-04-02T23:06:02.792+11:002016-04-02T23:06:02.792+11:00You have really sketched the onrush of day here--a...You have really sketched the onrush of day here--a very creative metaphor with the day being the horse though the sea has the crests which are very equine too! Thanks. k. Outlawyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15698845661756444061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7691731886166698880.post-47411991745253504902016-04-02T21:16:00.074+11:002016-04-02T21:16:00.074+11:00There's a tribal beat to this, a songline to t...There's a tribal beat to this, a songline to the ancestors. Amen.Brendanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03983584155125369291noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7691731886166698880.post-40485615693941642382016-04-02T20:52:07.978+11:002016-04-02T20:52:07.978+11:00You created a palpable atmosphere in these few lin...You created a palpable atmosphere in these few lines.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7691731886166698880.post-56450807074889448982016-04-02T18:46:02.743+11:002016-04-02T18:46:02.743+11:00Scrambled crests of waves - love that line. Came o...Scrambled crests of waves - love that line. Came over from Amy as my maiden name was Wiseman and I was drawn! Cheers, SallyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com